With a look of eager anticipation, Yun Jin turned to Zhongli and said, "Please, Mr. Zhongli, do give me your critique!"
Zhongli smiled faintly, his presence calm and composed: "Critique is hardly the word, merely a few shallow observations. The middle section of the play you just performed—Mr. Yun's action sequence—was undoubtedly the undeniable climax of the entire piece, truly captivating. However, this has resulted in the latter part and ending of the play appearing somewhat hollow, carrying a sense of... a rushed conclusion."
Hearing this, Guchen nodded in agreement: "Paimon and I came in halfway through, so we didn't see the beginning. Starting from the middle, I don't have much right to speak on the whole. But I also felt the ending was a bit hurried; in terms of brilliance, it certainly fell short of the middle section. It gives people a sense of... disconnect."
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