Su Zhen glared at Han Zhi, picked up the essays written by Su Shi and Little Su Zhe, and began reading them. Meanwhile, Han Zhi sat obediently to the side, suddenly reaching out a hand to point at a particular sentence and saying, "As for the wording here, I think adding the particle 'fu' at the beginning of the sentence would be better—after all, it's used for explanatory purposes."
"And this sentence here, is the sentence structure wrong? It looks a bit muddled."
Su Shi and Little Su Zhe also stretched their necks to look at the spot Han Zhi pointed to, then nodded in agreement.
Chapter 17